I don't think one liners are necessarily a good idea. Then tend to come across as lame to me. If you are not getting people messaging you back maybe change your approach?
A personal comment on one of my profile and photo usually works on me as it shows that the person actually read my profile and took time to learn about me.
I also dated a guy for a while who said I had the prettiest smile on Tinder. It was a cheesy line but it worked on me.
Funny can also work as well though you have to be careful here and not cross a line.
I also hate being called "Tinderella". Everyone says that and it is not original anymore.